17/3/10 prgress

today I monitered my team as they made improvments to there articles and hayden worked on the layout of the magazine by produsing a draft mock-up I then had to look at other peoples article and see what was good and what was not. I got tara and matts even thought there idea was good it got bit boring and had minor spelling mistakes. At the end of the lesson we gave our improved article so someone else in the class fro them to look at and make notes on spelling and grammer and and improvments they might need to make.